Hopes Peak Academy Rough Cut!

Appraisal:

Audio
I think the audio works very well throughout, the music suits the theme perfectly. The audio levels need to be adjusted slightly so you can hear dialogue a bit better, maybe some filters to remove ambient noises.

Special Effects
The special effects in the rough cut aren't finished at all, at the moment i only have 1 out of atleast 3. The one that i have is the telekinesis door opening, it looks okay but could do with a bit of tweaking to make it look better. We plan to do the rest of the Effects very soon.

Sequence
In my opinion, i think the sequence could be made a little bit more interesting. At the moment it contains a lot of walking, but that is to stop it looking like the character is teleporting; there's probably way's around it, although it does help give the sequence a calm and peaceful feeling to make it a surprise when the special effects come into play.