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Wednesday, 13 November 2013

Invisible Rivalry - Story Pitch

Alex has moved house after the separation of his parents and started sixth form at The City Academy, a big change for him. Alex is totally different, he has the power to turn people invisible. He discovered this power a few months back when someone who he was bullied by pushed him to the point where his power activated again the bully, since then he has learnt how to use this power to his advantage. After being bullied for most of his education, Starting new is going to be the biggest challenge for him so far. On his first day he is seated next to the class Bully, John who won’t leave Alex alone because he is shorter than most people in the Academy. He already has the nick name “Midget Boy”. He discovers a pretty girl in his class called Lola but he knows he has no chance with her as he is, so Alex decides to fight against and ignore his past by joining the boxing club; he wants to build his body up to impress Lola. But like any love story there is always that one guy who is bigger and better. in this story it happens to be John the Bully. The new opportunity is when Alex decides it’s time to make a move and turns John invisible. Alex is then able to try to make a move on Lola who after a few weeks finally starts to notice him and they start dating. The conflict is the rivalry between Alex and the John. Alex in the situation is the hero for fighting for himself and becoming the bigger person and along the way meeting his reward (Lola).

1 comments:

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Sophie Thomas said...
I like the story pitch and the whole rivalry part is good, I would say maybe make the end part clearer as I was confused when he turns him invisible and then there is a rivalry.

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